Audience feedback

Audience feedback

When we showed our storyboard to the rest of our class we got some feedback from them. They said that our title ideas seemed angsty so we will have to look at that, we thought after this we could use the name of the character. They also mentioned the locations and how we are going to make it look urban for an urban drama. We are looking at churches with graveyards that are on a road side so we have cars going past to show the urban environment. When locations were mentioned we also had a conversation about the use of a public toilet and how we would have to be careful filming these scenes as we have a boy in our group and we would have to use a girls toilet as there are three girls. In addition there should be more shots in London as it is an urban location that is well known drawing attention from people wo know these locations, Somebody suggested we film the shot where the stranger on the street calls the homeless person scum twice, once with and once without to see what works in case the dialogue is not a good quality. There was also talk about the sound we use would have to not be copyrighted as that is illegal so we will have to further research the music/sound we use.